Wednesday, November 7, 2012

Activity 1 - Intermediate 05 (I05): Smartphones all over the world!



Technology.....

It's everywhere we see, at institutes, universities, supermarkets, malls, restaurants and more. People or most of people around the world can not live without any kind of technology. We depend, sometimes too much, on all the benefits a piece of technology offers to the world, specially what we call: "Smartphones". They are everywhere and now it's easy to get one of these modern cell phones. They seem to help people a lot, but is that completely true?.

The first activity consists on writing a comment about your thoughts about Smartphones. Do you own one? What do you like and don't like about these modern cell phones? Post here your opinion in no less than 2 paragraphs.

I'm looking forward to reading your thoughts, have a nice day guys!

Alexander Guillén.


PS: Remember that you have until Saturday 3:00 pm to post your answers.

Activity for Intermediate 05 class. Schedule: 3:15 - 4:45 pm. 








51 comments:

  1. NATHALIE CAHUA CEPEDA I -05November 8, 2012 at 6:38 PM

    Nowadays we know that technology place a lot of importance in our lives because it is very useful.
    Firts of all, you can communicate with
    people around the world.
    But now I wanna focus in smartphones If you get oneyou can donwload videos, take photos and surf in internet without necesity of turn on your computer or laptop. So we can see that a convenience part of this is smartphones is portability.
    But in the other hand,
    This smartphonescan generate adition if you are not able to get under control. Smartphones can limited you ideas and It can leave you open your mind to relevant things such as studies or paying attention to your family. In conclusion We should found a good form how take the control about it and we dont have to leave that this piece of technology take control of us.

    NATHALIE ANDREA CAHUA CEPEDA I-05

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    1. I completely agree with you Nathalie, we must take action and control technology and not the other way around! Good job, just be careful with some verb forms and typos.

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  2. Johana Katherine Arias CastroNovember 8, 2012 at 7:27 PM

    I think the smartphones are a great help in our times because people are very busy and we need to communicate very fast. In my case, I have a smartphone and I use it for a lot of things ; for example, I used it for send my homeworks at the university , to chat with my friends , to download applications ,etc. I love this technology and I believe there are a lot of advantages. One of them is you can send emails with attached files, browse the Internet or watch videos on YouTube. Chat and text messaging allows you to send quick messages to friends and family. Also , there are many smartphones support GPS (global positioning system) functionality using 3G or 4G connectivity, so you always know exactly where you are, and you can find directions to your destination in moments and Perhaps the greatest advantage to owning a smartphone is the availability of thousands of small applications .Finally, it’s very important When they are used for business purposes, they can add to an employee’s productivity because the employee can work while traveling or from home if needed.

    Unfortunately, today many people know the consequences or disadvantages on frequent use of the cell phones or smartphones, many of them have to do with health and overdependence. Some disadvantages that we must consider are: Mobile phones decrease productivity for employees who are constantly checking personal cell phones and making calls or sending texts when they're supposed to be working, is the same story with the students in class, decrease your concentration and have lower school performance. About the cost, the smartphones are more expensive than others for the benefits provided by the software or by paying a monthly subscription, etc. But, for me the most important is the health. Smartphones emit radiation and may be linked to brain tumors.

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    1. What a great job Johana, very true indeed! You have mentioned some of the most important features of having a smartphone. Overall, this is a great job. Way to go!!

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  3. Esther Reyes YarlequeNovember 9, 2012 at 6:21 PM

    Well, I don't have smartphone, because is not necessary for me.
    I wouldn’t have one. I think smartphones are very stress. Everybody have one, but people don't use them because is necessary, they use a smartphones because is the last on the technology.

    There are some advantages of having Smartphones:

    * It has a lot of programs without necessary of use a computer.
    * It does your life more easy. (Activities)
    * In the work is very necessary to save time. (Conference, meeting)


    There are some desvantages of having Smartphones:

    * It is distraction for everybody, when they don't use correctly.
    * When people have one they want to have all the time and are being to convert an addiction.

    * Smartphones are dangerous, because you can risk your life. When you are get out to your home. (Reivers)

    This is my opinion..... :)

    Esther Reyes Yarleque - I05

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    1. All in all, straight to the point and clear. Good job Esther. Be careful with the spelling of some words and vocabulary items and next time try to develop your ideas a little bit more.

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  4. Kelly Torres Guerrero I5November 9, 2012 at 6:36 PM

    At the moment I don’t have a smartphone but I like to have one because the technology is currently around the world, is true that technology helps us and gives us many things smarthphones especially since not only serves to communicate with other people but through a smartphone can download videos, music, take photos, record videos, do work, go to many websites and can even locate a person who is not with us at that time, we can also locate and reach certain places you do not know.
    Well although smarthphones have many benefits on the other hand because of the product can be at risk of theft and other crimes, also we can produce an addiction as being a device that can find diversity of things can distract us our workplaces and educational responsibilities. It can also be the cause of the lack of communication between families as to be aware of the smartphone we forget about the people around us and strangely enough can also cause health problems as the vibrations that can cause us have cell phones disease.
    Finally smartphones offers many benefits and also the opposite
    KELLY TORRES GUERRERO I5

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    1. It looks like there are more side effects than advantages. I agree with you. Very good job Kelly, just be careful with some typos and don't forget to use the subject where is needed.

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  5. kenyi criss olivares castillaNovember 9, 2012 at 8:16 PM

    Well, I don't have a smartphone, but I would like to have one because this modern cellphone has everything.
    The things that I like it are:
    - You can check your e-mail when you are in the car or in the taxi, so you save time.
    - It has connection independent of internet,so It can save you when you have a problem.
    The things that I don't like it are:
    - It does that you don't have social life , so it can be addictive for the people.
    -this smartphones are very delicate ,so you will have to take care a lot.

    this new technology is doing that the people have a life more easy, but it also does that the people will be dependent to it, so you should use in form correct for don't have problems in your daily life.

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    1. In general clear and concise, good job Kenyi but be careful with the spelling of some words and try to elaborate your ideas a little bit more.

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  6. cecilia stefany zubiate martinezNovember 9, 2012 at 8:25 PM

    I don't have a smartphone because for me is not necessary. I only need a cellphone for make call and send messages, but i know smartphones in some cases is necessary for people who have to work I think is good because do easy some things and also you can safe time,the problem is, when the smartphone cause stress because you don't have free time and you have to use your smatphonne all the day, now this is a big problem in the families, friends,coworkers people are losing communication, if you pay attention when you walk you can see a lot of people using a smartphone also a little kids using their smartphone, Why does a child need a smartphone? I can't understand that, i think is not a good idea.

    Smartphones are a big distraction, students don't pay attention to clases because they are connected to social networks all the time and this is not good for their grades also smartphone are expencive. I think smartphone should be only used for people to work in office but from 8 a.m. to 6 p.m. then only used for make calls, the work shoudn't take home.

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    1. I find your thoughts very accurate, smartphones can affect our daily routine more than it can give us a remedy for chaos. Very good job Cecilia. Be careful with some typos.

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  7. ALEJANDRA ARELLANO NAPURINovember 9, 2012 at 8:34 PM

    I think the technology is very important in our lifes because it help us in many ways, we can do our homework, we can pay our bills, we can do everything.
    Nowdays most of people have a smartphone not only for the messages or calls, the people use the smartphones to communicate with others by internet using social pages like facebook, twitter, my space, etc. the people also use the samtphone to do important things like homework, check e-mails, for example if you didn't have time to finish an important presentation in your laptop you can send you document to your cellphone and finish.
    Unfortunately everything is not ok because when you use a smartphone too much it will become a sick.
    I have a samrtphone and i have to accept that i am a vicious, i am on line all day and i know it's dangerous so i am trying to use it short times a day.
    In conclusion, samrtphones are very cool, very useful, very helpful but you must know how to use it.

    ALEJANDRA ARELLANO NAPURI I05

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    1. Right! we need to control the use of technology otherwise we will end up depending too much on it! Very good Job Alejandra, this was clear and clean!

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  8. In my opinion the smartphones are a great way to make our lives easier but , as we know, everything has its disadvantages. If you overuse it you can get many problems like waste of time or earache or something like that, haha. I don't have a smart phone for now because I don't have enough money and I don't really need it. I'm ok with my cell phone because I just use it to make and recieve calls.

    Smartphones aren't the problem, the problem is when people use them in a wrong way, for example, some people waste almost all their time just chatting or using de aplicattions of their smartphones and they neglect their job, education or family. If you want a smartphone you have to be very responsible and distribute your time. :3

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    1. That is very true Renata, people blame it on the cell phone but it's the other way around. We have to control the use and organize our time with technology!. Good Job, just try to elaborate your ideas a little bit more.

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  9. francis skarleth guerra ramirezNovember 9, 2012 at 9:06 PM

    I don`t have a smartphones because I don’t have money for buy anyone, but I would like to have one and to fell modern.
    If you have a smartphone you will have more communication for example you can to use Facebook that is important for the university institutes or work, maybe you can cheek your e-mail very fast.
    Maybe have smartphone is have a life easier for me But Also I think that have a “smartphones” no is necessary because probably you can use another type of cellphone only for call and send messages or because you need to pay the service of the cellphone.
    In conclusion is the decision of the person if have a cellphone modern how smartphone because they are an expensive headache but for me have many benefits important for my university and in my private life.
    I don`t imagine my life without technology.

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    1. I believe it may be difficult for us not to depend on technology nowadays but we can still try. Good job Francis, just be careful with some verb forms and try to elaborate your ideas a little bit more.

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  10. GINA ARBIZU HUARACA
    Well for now I don't have a smartphone but I would like to have one because I think that help me in my college. So If I use a smartphone, I don't need to use my laptop because a Smartphone is a mobile phone that incorporates a PDA (Personal Digital Assistant), most offer e-mail, instant messaging, Internet capabilities and a personal organizer. Some smartphones can link to your computer, making it easy to upload info to and from your phone, while others allow you to create and edit Microsoft documents while on the go. That has a built in GPS to help you navigate your way around. Most also have MP3 players and will allow you to download music as well. All these are the advantages .
    the smartphones also have some disadvantages, like they are expensive and can get very pricey should you decide to buy the best models, overuse of your smartphone can make you forget to take care of yourself; another reason is, they can be complicated and finally, they are less personal. They aren’t cheap because the equipment required is expensive and the service in Peru is expensive too. Also Smartphones are complicated because sometimes they require programs that are difficult to learn and there maybe a need to download new programs in order to have a better performance; and finally they are less personal because you can’t see the persons face and their reactions or expressions when you are communicating with them.
    That is my opinion.

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    1. I agree with you Gina, some smartphones can be really difficult to understand and even more to use. Good job, just be careful with some typos.

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  11. Hello teacher! Well in my opinion the Smartphones are very cool, you can get many applications like games, flashlight, dictionary and other kind of stuff. I have watched all my friends using this kind of cellphones. In my case I don't have a cellphone because those are expensive and my mom doesn't have that amount of money. I would like to get one because my boyfriend is going to travel and I wish talk to him with the magical help of Skype and Facebook XD!.

    What I like more of those cellphones is the way that i can connect with my friends and family. It's really easy surf in the internet and chat. I have a little problem, I love plays on line games like angry birds, bubble witch and solitaire. That is maybe one of my main reasons to have a smartphone. I have my cousin and he has a Samsung Galaxy, so he is always posting oh his Facebook but most of the time he's paying attention to the cellphone and not to the family. I don't like that about smartphones. Those reduce the human contact -i'm overreacting- but true history. The other day in my Class'es Halloween Party everybody was chatting and anybody dancing that could be turn a fun party in a boring one ><. The other day in my aunt's home there was a blackout, and all the cellphones were dead, so everybody was sleeping or playing cards. It's was fanny because we spent time talking each other playing cards and drinking coffee. My advise for people who maybe love to much their cellphones is: You'd turn off your cellphones and talk in the old fashion way with regular people, It's more interesting. Well, that is my opinion about Smartphones, Those could be interesting but also boring up to a point. Bhye bye see you teacher! C:

    Silvanita Cuadros GĂłmez Intermediate 5 *-*

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    1. True story Silvana, very good job and I totally agree with you. People should go back in time and remember what it used to be our lives in the past. All in all very good job.

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  12. Well I think that technology device is very important in our lifes! Around the world people use it for different reasons, to communicate, to work, to play, etc.
    "Smartphones" are part of this and can help us save time and money.The main reason to use it is that you can get fosters communication, information, applications and more things that will help you in different places, situations and circumstances.I don't have one but I would like to get one because if I get one, I can to communicate with my friens, I can get information easily from internet and more things that I want do.Those are being used for everybody in the world because if you buy it, you can get a lot of benefits by what is sophisticated.The advantage of this is that you can to communicate easily because is not necessary to use your computer to send mails or another information.

    On the other hand for me "Smartphones" also have disadvantages! The reason is that if you get one and if you don't have money to get internet, you don't going to can to do what you want to do.Also if you use it in some place that you don't know maybe a robber can steal you because those are used in different places like work, university, schools, etc.
    Finally, I believe if you feel good with your cell phone, you don't need to change this but, if you want to get one, you have to care about it.
    In conclusion if you don't really need a Smartphone, you don't buy it because you don't going to use correctly and it's too expensive. xp

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    1. It is very important to learn how to use and even more how to adapt on this new kind of technology, I agree with you Bryan, very good job, just be careful with some verb forms.

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  13. Although I don’t have a Smartphone. I can think many things I could do with one. Obviously smartphones are a big advantage because they have a good camera, a touch screen, wifi, gps , etc. Also you can download many applications. These applications are very useful and make our lives easier. Nowadays many people won a lot of money creating applications, but not all are advantages about smartphones. I think smartphones are sometimes a distraction. For example, when I am in my university’s library I see many people who are only here for free WIFI and don’t study. I understand them because when I am at home on the computer the same thing happens to me. Some people are dependent on smartphones. I think everybody have a friend who are all the time with his smartphone sending messages or chatting, but also there are people who don’t like smartphones. They think smartphones are a constant distraction and could generate addiction. For them, cell phones only have to use it for doing calls or sending messages.
    Finally, we should use smartphones wisely because they are a great advantage for our life. Also I think the most important about smartphones is when we have to use them. You shouldn’t use them when you have to study, work or other activities where you have to concentrate. So you should use them when you take a break or for relaxing.

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    1. You are correct Santiago, people tend to depend to much on cell phones, Very good job, just be careful with some verb forms.

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  14. Fernando Valdivia BustillosNovember 10, 2012 at 9:23 AM

    Actually I dont have a Smartphone cause I dont need one and I think that it is a waste of money. Its truth that a Smartphone is very convenient because it is very entertained you can acces to your social networks, save time cheking your hotmail anywhere, you can chat with your friends.A smartphone is almost like a computer so you can make a lot operations online and the internet can save you in many occasions.
    But on the other hand it socially isolates you from the real world it can produce a sensation of dependence, also it generates costs postpaid plan to buy apps, accessories care, etc.With a smartphone you expose a lot of personal information,replacement cost is very high, if it gets stolen or you lose shocked your pocket.They are more delicate, the battery runs faster and they have sensitive touch screens.
    Thats why you must buy a smartphone, just if you really need it.

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    1. That's true Fernando, when you have a modern cell phone it comes with a price and that price continues generating in time. Good job, just try to elaborate more on your ideas.

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  15. Now I have a Smartphone and I think is very necessary because when I need enter to enter net I can enter by my cellphone and I can check my e-mail, the news, etc. then when I have problems I can communicate very fast with my parents or when they need to communicate with my. And also when I’m lost I can use GPS system and I can know when I am.
    But in other hand I think the Smartphones distract people because some student at school and university use their Smartphone for enter their Facebook or twitter when they are in class and they don´t pay attention to the class. I think they should use their Smartphone when they are in their free time.

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    1. I believe students get distracted a lot when using a smartphone. You are correct Gilmar, good job. Be careful with the spelling of some words and verb forms.

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  16. Well, I don't own a smartphone, but I got knowledge about this cell phone because I like to learn everything about high technology.

    What do I like about smartphones? I think these modern cell phones can help you in particular situations. For example, when you need a computer for researching information and you don't have one, you could use a smartphone, it can be useful. With this cell phone, you can get web access and do different activities like chating with your friends or sending messages.

    But there are things that I don't like about smartphones. If you don't have control about usage of this modern cell phone, you will lose time, and won't do your diary activities very well. You could use this time for doing something more important. I think to have face-to-face interaction is better than spend time chating online. Finally, you are the person who chooses the usage of your smartphone!

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    1. If people are clever then they should be able to be smarter than their smartphones, I totally agree with you Hendermann, very good job. Clear and accurate.

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  17. i have a smartphone, i've found some benefits to this kind of cellphone, for example when you go to a conference or in a classroom maybe to record some dialogs from the professionals or teachers, in other cases you have to take pictures when you have a trip, to record videos or connect to internet to know where is the location of some place you don't know, when you're lost and you wanna find and address(All this with the GPS), to carry your music with you everywhere you go, benefits like a digital tv in your cellphone, videocalls, a lot of interactive games and apps that appear with their updates daily or monthly, the smartphones have a lot of this stuff and more and every year appears a new generation, but at the same time the smartphones are stressfull.
    For example, did you know about "the text neck"??? it's a disorder in the position of the neck caused by the use of smartphones, tablets, and other gadgets. Many hours a day with the neck bent down causes stiff neck, shoulder pain and headaches. I found this information in a tweet and i wasn't surprised because i knew that someday the people in the world would suffer a kind of illness related with the technology.
    Well stress, disorders in our body, what's next? deaths by smartphones? they're a nice and entertainment tool for us, who doesn't go anywhere without one? because when we're bored... what's our solution? smartphone yeah!... but they're affecting in our social life and we've been keeping away from people and we prefer texting in our smartphone instead having a nice conversation with a partner, a friend.

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    1. Very interesting post Brian, honestly I didn't know about that kind of disorder, though I've had headaches and neck aches. People must worry about their health too, thanks for pointing that out. Very good job indeed.

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  18. Now I don´t have a Smartphone but I would like to have one because I think It's necessary for communicate fastly. Also you can use it for your homework or consult something in internet, check your facebook. Other advantage is that the smartphone is how a computer, it´s small and portable. you can go to different place and you don´t need a big bag or electricity. Also you can take photos, listen to music, see a videos, investigate something or have a map when you need to go somewhere you don´t know.

    I think some disadvantages are it´s expensive for some people. also you don´t use in the street or in the bus because steal you.then it is addictive and also you can distrac when you are in the scool or university or work.

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    1. Smartphones seem to help a lot but I agree with you when it comes to be in the position of getting robbed, we should be careful when using these modern cell phones on the streets. Good job Eva, just try to check some verb forms and spelling and elaboration of ideas.

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  19. I think the Smartphones are so important in our life because It makes more faster to communicate with a person. They are in all the places that we visit and their price are not too much, well depends of the kind of cellphone, and last but not least these cell contains many applications and clear you can also download the application type you want, in my opinion are very important, necessary, and lightweight.
    Now I have not a smartphone but I like to have one, for me it has more priority is my studies, I'm in college, I studied English and a diploma at another university, the truth is that if my parents want to give me one is well for me but if they do not want also good for me I have no problems, I use my laptop and while not as comfortable as a smartphone. this helps me a lot in my daily tasks

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    1. I think the problems is when people depend to much on technology and forget about basic real life interaction. Nice job "Anonymous" but be careful with spelling and try to elaborate your ideas a little bit more. And don't forget to post using your full name.

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  20. Hi Teacher! A couple of months somebody stole my cellphone at the bus. Fortunately nothing happened to me for this reason I had to buy a new cellphone. I wanted to buy a simple cellphone but the salesperson told me about smartphones. I have to be honest I didn't wanted to buy one but the salesperson explained to me about more details of these cellphones for example: It has an internet (social networks) , wi fi, camera, mp3 music, video,etc.
    I really liked it I thought it's very necessary for me fortunately smartphones has advantages like I needed check my emails messages, surf on the internet, check my social networks, etc. I decided to bought one of these smartphones and the most important reason it's on sale I paid S/. 100 because I had one renovation for equipment with claro.
    Unfortunately smartphones has disadvantages like this the most important reason is the health. Smartphones emit radiation and may be linked to brain tumors. the Smartphones distract people because some students at school and university using their Smartphone for enter the social networks and they don´t pay attention to the class, You can get addicted to your cellphone and Finally you have to be careful for the robberies in this city!!!

    FLOR CAMPOS YERREN I05

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    1. Interesting post Flor, we have to be careful when using cell phones in public places. Very good job just be careful with some verb forms.

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  21. For the students who haven't posted yet, you will have time until tomorrow! Have a nice weekend!

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  22. Well I have a smartphone, I think it´s very neccesary because there are many appliances and you can use it when you don´t have a computer at hand, can you see smartphones in everywhere and more and more people have one. I think there are advantage and desadvantage for example if you want to check your e-mail and don´t have time to go to a cafe internet you can see in your smartphone, it can also help with GPS and locate a person and you can connect to the social network eveytime without having to be in front of the computer. Although not everything are good.

    These have some disadvantages. Smartphones can produce an adicction , actually many people have smartphone adicction , they use it everytime and don´t spend time in other activities , so I think only you decide what to do with your smartphone . I think they should use their smartphone only in the free time or when you need it

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    1. It's becoming very addictive indeed! Good job Kathy, just be careful with some verbs form.

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  23. Dayana Milein Rubina MoreNovember 11, 2012 at 5:33 PM

    I think smartphones are very useful because we can do a lot of thing with them, and for that, we can save a lot of time. For example they have support of internet and we can read some documents of differents formats like pdt or programs of Microsoft Office, and a student could send a homework to his/her teacher using them. Also we can do other things such listen to music and take photos at the same time, and we can install additional programs. They are like computers, for that, if someone likes the facility of a computer he or she should buys one.

    But, not everything about smartphones are good, because they can be a addiction for a person if this person don´t know how use it right. For example, some students prefer communicate with their friends by smarthphones instead of listening to their teacher in class. Also they are expensives.
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    Finally, I don´t have a smartphone and I wouldn´t buy one because usually a thief steal my cellphones. For that I prefer have a economic cellphone.

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    1. It is terrible when you are a "cacerito", we have to be careful when it comes to robbers. Good job Dayana, just be careful with some verbs and nouns.

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  24. Well, first at all I don´t have one, but I think that having a smartphone can make our life easier, but it also have some disadvantages that are very problematic. One advantage of smartphones is that we can use internet through the free Wi-Fi in some places, you can enter to your Facebook, Twitter and YouTube. You can also listen to music and watch videos while you are waiting for someone or something.
    On the other hand we have some disadvantages but the most important, I think, is that you are at risk when you carry your smartphone everywhere because we know there are a lot of thieves on streets and if you are showing your phone is easy that someone come and steal it, and it´s worse when you don´t leave that him steal your smartphone because he can hurt you.
    So I think there are good and bad points of having a smartphone but the way you use it and where do you carry it depend of you.

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    1. It can be very dangerous indeed Miguel, good job just be careful with some verbs.

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  25. CECILIA SALAZAR LARREA comment:

    Actually, Smartphones are the new generation of cellphones. They have a lot of functions for example display photos, play videos and surf the Web.A smartphone also offers the ability to send and receive e-mail and edit Office documents, for example. It`s perfect if you want to download your favorites songs. I think that they are very important in our life because when you have to search something on the web is easy for you if you have internet in your smartphones.

    I bought a smartphone last month, and I feel very happy because is the first time that I have this kind of cellphone. For example, when I’m at ICPNA and I don´t understand the meaning of the words I use the translate of my cellphone. When I’m at the university, I search a lot of kind of information that I need to do my homework.

    My experiences with smartphones is very well but it has disadvantages because I know that there are some persons who spend a lot of hours on the internet, and they do it because have a smartphone, this is the cause, but the effect is that they are distracted and don’t finish their activities.Also, teens spend a lot of time playing games online with their smartphones and they don´t have control. These persons should try to spend less time on the internet because they could become addicted.

    My recommendation is: “If you have a smartphone, try to use it for important things”.

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    1. I also agree on the fact that it's getting addictive to children as well, nice job Cecilia. Be careful with some nouns and verbs.

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  26. Janaly Gallardo RegaladoNovember 20, 2012 at 4:54 PM

    JANALY GALLARDO REGALADO

    The smartphones is a item all people need.The smartphone is used for calla people, when they aren´t home.
    The smartphones has advantagen and disavantages. One advantages is that we can have a quick comunication, Another benefit the people don´t need to be home to answer to call.
    The smartphones is privacy only yourself can see your smartphones. Also there are automatic smartphones.
    Now in the smartphones we can all long distance or other countries, now that there is smartphones we can surf the internet. The smartphones has a camare, the downsid to this is the people became addicted, Another drawback is that the smartphones can bring diases to people. There are more expensive smartphones. This item is more delicate, you can have the smartphones in anonymous.
    In conclusion there are advantages and disavantages for smartphones. I think is neccesary the use smartphones because the people should to be comunicated,The smartphones is neccesary for an emergency.

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    1. People depend on them too much, I agree. Janaly be careful with some verbs and nouns forms and typos as well.

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